Personal Narritive

      I wrote my personal narrative about the summer job I got at Chick-Fil-A. It is about one customer in particular and how their words affected me. I am having a little trouble with the one line in the dialogue sounding a little cheesy and I will be changing that. I have a little too much description of the restaurant  at the beginning and will hopefully be changing that too.
      I hope that I have enough details that the reader can see the situation playing out. I also think the end is too direct in the meaning but hope it isn't too direct. I think it is an accurate situation to show the community at Chick-Fil-A I experienced.

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