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Purple Hibiscus Poem

Dad,

I'm sad.
love,
I'm in pursuit of.

See me,
the only thing I plea.
Impress you,
the only thing I try to do.

Dad.

Perspective of Kambili to her father.

Comments

  1. Austin SMarch 28, 2018 at 9:41 AM

    Very creative and a wonderful poem! I understood everything you were trying to say.

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  2. Gregory F.March 28, 2018 at 6:17 PM

    I love how you implemented Purple Hibiscus into your free post. I also think this is accurate representation of Kambili's thoughts.

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